The first half was amazing, but...
I loved the first half of this song - you need to make more ambient!- but the unfitting ending wasn't only unfitting. It wasn't good in it's own right. I just feel you could've done better in the second half. Whether or not your ending fits the rest of the song, it should be something you think truly sounds appealing.
Pretty good, but...
I liked your song, but it has a bit of a problem. Until one full minute into the song, the song lacks any true melody, depth, or emotion. It is very good when the lead-up ends, but it goes back into the lead up after a several seconds. After the second lead up the song begins to show more variety, but then falls into the lead up yet again. I feel the song has too much lead up and too little actual song. This would be okay if the song had a better lead up, but the lead up is redundant and repetitive, which does not make for a good song in my opinion. Still, you did a pretty good job, and with a little tweaking, this song could be very good.
Pretty good, but the voice ruins it.
I liked this melody of this song a lot, but the voice seemed too unnecessary and sort of clashed with the song. I know you wanted to make this song have to do with Christmas, but the vocals seem too intrusive. I simply don't enjoy having a voice repeating, "Tree star gift stocking" over and over. I am not saying you have to get rid of them. I am just saying that you should change the vocals so that they strengthen the melody, not distract from it. Other that that, however this song is very good.
I like it, cause it's weird :D Sorry you didn't care for it! I made it on deadline so I'm not 100 percent proud of it. Thanks for the review.
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